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Sunset – Haiku

on August 16, 2013

Sunset in Carmarthenshire-0-

Golden scene fading

Last light of day tints the sky

Carmarthen at night

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6 responses to “Sunset – Haiku

  1. I like this haiku, I just think it’s a pity you used the word ‘light’ two times. If you find a way to work around that, it would become even better, I think.

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